Christopher Whitt:
Personally, everything looks pretty good, except for a few things,
be careful with your wording, which I have pointed out,
also, be very careful with your spelling, and add some pictures or more color to your blog. Other than that I think you are doing a good job.
I think your blog could use some more pictures,
but most of all in almost every blog I read, you were criticizing yourself. If you feel this way about yourself and let everyone see it, how do you think everyone else will view you. Your blogs need a little work, but don't put so much emphasizes on yourself.
I think your posts are pretty good, but you could use a few more pictures and use skitch more to point out what you think is the best, or what needs work. Otherwise, it looks pretty good.
Alexis Bryant:http://avib2012.blogspot.com/
Your blogs are really well written, but they are
missing the most important thing, pictures. You need pictures to let everyone know what you are talking about, and they put color and emphasizes on your blog.
Your blogs are really well written, but they are
missing the most important thing, pictures. You need pictures to let everyone know what you are talking about, and they put color and emphasizes on your blog.
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Also, on your guest blog, all of your pictures haven't been downloaded with your blog, this really needs fixed, it will make the blog look better.
http://computertechsystems.blogspot.com/
Ted Grubb
As far as your blog they look O.K., but you need to
add more emphasizes on your pictures and
make sure you put your name in there.
http://redwingrob.blogspot.com
Robert Heck:
You aren't putting enough information in for your products. The more you put in the blog about them the more it will make people want to check it out.
http://jimison0tyler.blogspot.com/
Tyler Jimison:
You really need to add some more pictures, some of your blogs don't have any.
http://thephoenixhub.blogspot.com/
Scotty Johnson:
I think you could use some more pictures, and make sure that your photo's fit into your blog width.
http://amberdawnzie.blogspot.com/
Amber Ross: Your blog is really neat looking, but you have alot of white, you might want to add some color to it. Also, you need to use skitch more.
As far as your blog they look O.K., but you need to
add more emphasizes on your pictures and
make sure you put your name in there.
http://redwingrob.blogspot.com
Robert Heck:
You aren't putting enough information in for your products. The more you put in the blog about them the more it will make people want to check it out.
James Hill:
I have nothing to say about James blog, I think he did a really good job. He used skitch really often, to point out his good and bad points. James keep up the good work.
http://jimison0tyler.blogspot.com/
Tyler Jimison:
You really need to add some more pictures, some of your blogs don't have any.
http://thephoenixhub.blogspot.com/
Scotty Johnson:
I think you could use some more pictures, and make sure that your photo's fit into your blog width.
http://amberdawnzie.blogspot.com/
Amber Ross: Your blog is really neat looking, but you have alot of white, you might want to add some color to it. Also, you need to use skitch more.
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